An Ugh Moment

I’ve been working on a children’s story. This story has been in the works for more than a couple of years. Yep, you read that correctly…more than a couple of years. I thought the story would flow easily but it has not. Well, in my head it did. So this has taken me quite by surprise. After all, I had six children and I read hundreds of children’s stories. I should know this. I thought it was my calling.

But now I’m wondering…

I recently googled rules for writing children’s books and, well…to be honest, I’ve broken most of them. The pages shouldn’t exceed 32. Oops. The phrase, what the heck shouldn’t be used. Who knew? It shouldn’t be about teaching something. Are you kidding me? 

Rules, shmules…

Most of the story is written. I’ve got the ending to complete. But as I read, proofread, and read again…I am wondering what the heck? 

This story is way longer than I intended. I’m thinking it’s maybe too wordy for little ones. Will it keep their attention? Is it cute enough? Is it easy to understand? Does it flow? Is it too old for some kids but too young for others? Just what age group am I leaning towards anyway? 

I think it’s an adorable storyline so why is it so difficult for me to write? 

On the other hand…I am most excited about the story’s illustrations. I have two family members who will be working their magic to make the story come alive. I am anxious to see how it all comes together.

I guess I’m just having an UGH moment. I’ll put it away and look it with fresh eyes tomorrow. Maybe then I’ll even have an ending. 

♥️

Andi